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The chart below shows the percentage of population in the largest two cities and the rest of cities in seven countries in 2017.

主體段分段：

主體1：Japan，New Zealand, China, USA（黃色>藍(lán)色）

主體2：UK、France（藍(lán)色>黃色），Germany（黃色=藍(lán)色）

開頭段

The bar chart illustrates the population distribution across seven countries, comparing the proportions of citizens living in the largest two cities with those in all other cities in 2017.

概述段

Overall, Japanhad the highest proportion ofurban population,whileNew Zealandhad the lowest. Germany was the only nation wherethe population was split equallybetween the two types of cities,whereasChinaexhibited the most dramatic disparitybetween these two demographic groups.

思路要點(diǎn)：

- Japan雙色數(shù)值都最高，New Zealand雙色數(shù)值都最低

- 只有Germany雙色數(shù)值相等，China雙色差距最大

Body paragraph 1

It is clear thatpeople from four countriesdisplayed a clear preferencefor living outside the primary urban centers. This was most pronounced in China, where 35% of the population lived in other cities,compared withonly 5% in the top two.A similar pattern appeared inthe USA, where 25% resided in smaller cities,five times the proportion inthe largest ones. Japan and New Zealanddemonstrated smaller differencesbetween the two groups (roughly 3%), with approximately 40% and 8% living in other cities, respectively.

思路要點(diǎn)：Japan，New Zealand, China, USA

- 有四個(gè)國家黃色>藍(lán)色

- China：雙色差距最大，黃色數(shù)值為35%，但藍(lán)色數(shù)值僅為5%

- USA：雙色差距也較大，黃色數(shù)值為25%，是藍(lán)色的5倍

- Japan、New Zealand：雙色差距相似(約為3%)，其中Japan黃色占比40%，New Zealand黃色占比8%

Body paragraph 2

Conversely, in the UK,a larger share ofits population (approximately 35%) resided in the two largest cities,in contrast to20% in other urban areas. In France,the distribution was relatively balanced, with about 30% residing in the top two cities and 27% in smaller ones. Germanyshowed an equal division, with both categoriesaccounting forroughly 25% of the population.

思路要點(diǎn)：UK，F(xiàn)rance，Germany

- UK：藍(lán)色(35%)，顯著超過黃色(20%)

- France：雙色差距較小，藍(lán)色數(shù)值為30%，黃色數(shù)值為27%

- Germany：黃色、藍(lán)色占比相同，都為25%

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