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The two bar charts illustrate the changes in the overall population of a UK town and the proportion of people in different age groups from 1951 to 2011.

主體段分段：一圖一段

開頭段

The bar charts illustrate the total population of a town in the UK and present how this population was distributed across five age groups from 1951 to 2011.

概述段

Overall, the town's populationexperienced a significant increaseduring the period. The middle-aged group (41-to-64-year-olds)consistently represented the largest proportion.

思路要點：

- 總人口呈上升趨勢

- 41-64的人數一直最多

Body paragraph 1

According to the first bar chart, this town recorded an overall population of 100,000 in 1951, whichthendoubledto 200,000 in 1991.However,this was followed bya slight decrease toapproximately 175,000 by 2011.

思路要點：

1950年人口為100,000→隨后上漲了兩倍，到1990年達到200,000→隨后小幅度下降到2010年達到175,000

Body paragraph 2

Regardingthe distribution across age groups, older individualsconstantly made up a larger share of the population. The 41–64 age groupdominatedthroughout the period,althoughtheir figuredropped significantlyfrom 47% in 1951 to 38% in 2011.By contrast, the percentage of those aged 65 and overnearly tripled, reaching20% by the end of the period.Younger age groups showed less dramatic changes.Despiteminor fluctuations, the proportion of children aged 0-14remained relatively stableat 15%. Meanwhile, the 15–29 and 30–40 age groupspeakedat 21% and 18% in 1991, beforefalling slightly to 20% and 17% in 2011.

思路要點：

- 41-64：占比始終最高，從1951年的47%急劇下降到2011年達到38%

- 65+：1951到2011年間上漲了3倍達到20%

- 其余三個年齡段數值變化幅度較小

- 0-14：經歷輕微波動，但數值穩定在15%

- 15-29、30-40：1991年都達到峰值21%和18%→2011年都小幅度下降到20%和17%

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