支招小作文(234) I 動態(tài)線圖組合 火車延誤率&取消率變化

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The graphs below show the change in rates of delayed trains and cancelled trains from the first week in October to the third week in November.

主體段分段：一圖一段

開頭段

The two line graphs illustrate the weekly percentages of train delays and cancellations over a seven-week period from early October to mid-November.

概述段

Overall, both the delay and cancellation ratesexperienced noticeable fluctuationsover the period.Whiledelayspeakedin mid-November,the highest cancellation rate occurred inmid-October.

思路要點：

- 延誤率、取消率整體都呈現(xiàn)上升趨勢，伴隨顯著波動

- 十一月延誤率更高，十月取消率更高

Body paragraph 1

In terms ofthe rate of delays,there was a modest risefrom 20% in the first week of October to 30% a week later,followed bya noticeable droptoa low of10% by the end of October.Aftera surge toa peak of50% in the second week of November, this figuredeclined rapidlyby 20% in the subsequent week.

思路要點：延誤率

- 從OCT_W1到OCT-W2，從20%小幅度上升到30%→隨后顯著下降到OCT_W4達到10%→到NOV-W2上漲5倍→到NOV-W3急劇下降

Body paragraph 2

Similar variations were also exhibited in cancellations.The ratebegan at3% in the first week andsoaredto 7% in the second week of October, beforefalling sharply tothe original level in the next week.The following three weeks experienced a period of fluctuationsbetween 2% and 3.5%, after whicha remarkable growth was recordedto 5% in the third week of November.

思路要點：取消率

- 取消率也經(jīng)歷了顯著波動

- OCT_W1取消率為3%→急劇上升，OCT_W2達到7%→OCT_W3急劇下降回3%→隨后，到NOV_W2在2%-3.5%之間波動→到NOV_W3顯著上升達到5%

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