支招小作文(233) I 動(dòng)態(tài)柱 做家務(wù)時(shí)間變化

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The chart below illustrates the average number of hours spent on housework per day by four different groups of people in 1985, 1995, and 2005.

按照<數(shù)值大小>分段：

- Body 1：unemployed women、women with part-time employment【數(shù)值較高】

- Body 2：women with full-time employment、men with full-time employment【數(shù)值較低】

開頭段

The bar chart compares the average daily hours devoted to household chores by four groups—unemployed women, women with part-time jobs, women working full-time, and men employed full-time—in three years: 1985, 1995, and 2005.

概述段

Overall, unemployed womenconsistently devoted the most timeto housework across all the given years,whilefull-time working menspent the leastthroughout the period.Whilethe time spent on houseworkremained relatively stablefor most groups, minor fluctuations were observed.

思路要點(diǎn)：

- Unemployed women做家務(wù)時(shí)間一直最高

- Men with full-time employment做家務(wù)時(shí)間一直最低

- 整體數(shù)值較為平穩(wěn)，但有輕微波動(dòng)

Body paragraph 1

It is notable that two groups contributed more to household tasks. Unemployed womenspent the most time indomestic tasks during the 20-year period, beginning at 7 hours in 1985. This figuredipped slightlyto 6.8 hours in 1995,beforerising back to7 hours by 2005.In comparison, part-time working women devoted 6 hours per day to household chores in all the three years,ranking secondin terms of time spent on housework.

思路要點(diǎn)：unemployed women、women with part-time employment【數(shù)值較高】

- 有兩組人做家務(wù)時(shí)間較久

- unemployed women：1985年7hours→小幅度下降到1995年的6.8 hous→2005年小幅度上升回7hours

- women with part-time employment：1985-2005年間數(shù)值不變，平穩(wěn)在6hours

Body paragraph 2

In contrast, full-time working adults spent considerably less time on domestic duties. Forfull-time employed women, the averagedropped significantlyfrom 3 hours in 1985 to 2 hours in 1995,followed bya modest rise to2.5 hours in 2005.Meanwhile, full-time working mensaw a gradual increasein the time spent on chores,reaching1.2 hours in 2005.

思路要點(diǎn)：women with full-time employment、men with full-time employment【數(shù)值較低】

- 全職工作的人做家務(wù)時(shí)間較少

- women with full-time employment：1985年3hours→顯著下降到1995年達(dá)到2hours→2005年小幅度上升到2.5hours

- men with full-time employment： 1985到2005年間小幅度上升到1.2hours

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